May 2

100 word challenge

100 word challenge

I woke up and screamed with joy it was Sunday my favorite day! i had gymnastics, but i still had 30 mins to spare so i decided to do my homework it was boring maths!!! although 30 mins had come very quick before i knew it it was time to go to gymnastics. when i got there there looked like there was this new teacher. then gymnastics started and our teacher introduced himself he said his name was Mr. Robert. he diffident seem very nice. as we were stretching out for our warm ups he went to go get a drink but he walked through the wall i was confused i said to myself I HOPE WE DON’T HAVE A GHOST TEACHER!!


Posted May 2, 2017 by ava2016 in category Uncategorized

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge

  1. antsclass

    Ava,
    this is a very engaging piece. I particularly like the way you describe the normal events of a kid’s afternoon….and then surprise us with the supernatural idea of walking through walls. This opposite sort of mood creates a surprise that grabs the reader’s attention, and makes us wonder what is going to happen.
    Make sure you check that all your sentences start with a capital letter.
    Ant

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