August 8

100 word challenge: Cushion Scarlet Annoying Watered Violin) fiction

Scarlet my mum called its time to go to go birthday shopping!

normally i’m so excited for my birthday but its so Annoying every year on my birthday she plays the Violin in my ear as i wake up.

we got to the shops and my mum saw this color changing Cushion in the window, no joke it was actually pretty cool!

then i ran to my favorite shop target and saw this cool plant that Watered itself mum can i please get it I’ve wanted this!! OK she said.

to be honest I’ve actually never seen this before but when i say I’ve always wanted this its more convincing and its more likely i will get it.


Posted August 8, 2017 by ava2016 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “100 word challenge: Cushion Scarlet Annoying Watered Violin) fiction

  1. antsclass

    Ava- this is a fantastic piece with a fun humourous voice. I loved how you managed to incorporate all the words.
    When you reread your work, look out to make sure you use capitals at the start of sentences and not in other places. Also, be careful to put in your punctuation-in particular, make sure you use talking marks to indicate when people are talking.
    Great work
    Ant

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