100 Word Challenge- (Picture prompt)
I was on the edge of a cliff holding on for dear life on this piece of rope wondering if i was going to survive this traumatic moment.
I had never felt this kind of fear before. I could smell death coming my way, either getting eaten by a furious roaring bear or falling into the ocean below infested with killer sharks.
The bear was getting closer, time was getting shorter. I was clueless and stupid so I let go and fell (449 ft) which is the same height as the empire state building.
When I hit the ocean I was bleeding from head to toe. I had hit a big rock on the way down. That was a bad sign because blood attracts sharks.
The water started to swish side to side getting faster and faster. ”Shark” I scream trying to get help but I knew I was gone as soon as the shark opened its wide sharp mouth eating already half my arm.

Hi Ava,
Your story was interesting and intriguing.
I loved how your started off your story with interesting word choice.
My favourite part of the story was when you said that you were “holding on for dear life”. It made me laugh whilst it gave me a clear creative imagery of the story.
I think this has been the best piece you’ve written so far.
Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kind regards,
Eloise.